FLASH FICTION #12:
Salim sweatingly pedaled to the stop. He had to be there at 8 to meet Kajal, but was late by many minutes. If not today, all his dreams would go shapeless.
Kajal was standing on the pavement tapping her foot in expectancy, waiting to receive the letter from Salim and deposit it with Aaila. It was the last day of her college, and the first time she was postmanning a love letter.
After handing over the letter and receiving promises that it would find Aaila, Salim turned his bicycle around. Kajal, in hurry, stepped down the pavement to cross the road. The sound of a large vehicle coming to a sudden stop, and the synchronous exclamations of the passersby tapped Salim’s instinct. There was no Kajal; only her blood squeezed out by the front tyre.
Salim didn’t sleep that night. He cried, hit himself on the forehead and went on hunger for days. He knew it was his fault. Only if he had arrived a bit earlier that morning… Aaila would have received his love letter.
A bit confusing
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Salim is more worried about not getting the letter to Aaila than Kajal’s death. An exaggeration of selfishness 🙂
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I know humans are selfish but why is ur hero worried more about the letter delivery girl Aaila than his lovers death.
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nice one nanba…really nice…
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I’ve nominated you for the ‘Real Neat Blog’ and ‘Blog-aholic’ awards. I’ll be glad if you accept them😊
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